last week at the range

[otto150]

last sunday . I was shooting , on a smoke break, this rather obese guy hiked his leg a ripped a big fart, with gusto.ilaughed and said , I see you brought your 50 cal today.

[98Z5V]

That's funny. Get in your CMC trigger thread and explain exactly what failed in your CMC trigger...  

[DNP]

I'm gonna guess you had to be there. Maybe I just need to know how obese the gentleman was and it will help the visual image. Had he been of ordinary size, this would have lost all of its humor.  Also, could you explain the odor...it would add a touch of realism and help bring the reader right into the story. A little longer setup may be helpful along with more detail about the sound could strengthen things. That sound leading to the punchline should be so vivid that even the dumbest of us on this forum would hear it as we read.  Who was on the smoke break?  You, or the fat man?  And last Sunday was a good start. Morning?  Noon?  11:43?  Details Otto. We need more details. I'm subscribing. 

[otto150]

I was smoking , he was 5.8 feet, poss.350. I didn't stickmy nosee in his corn hole and analyze the smell.we both chuckled though.

[Sisco]

16 hours ago, DNP said:

I'm gonna guess you had to be there. Maybe I just need to know how obese the gentleman was and it will help the visual image. Had he been of ordinary size, this would have lost all of its humor.  Also, could you explain the odor...it would add a touch of realism and help bring the reader right into the story. A little longer setup may be helpful along with more detail about the sound could strengthen things. That sound leading to the punchline should be so vivid that even the dumbest of us on this forum would hear it as we read.  Who was on the smoke break?  You, or the fat man?  And last Sunday was a good start. Morning?  Noon?  11:43?  Details Otto. We need more details. I'm subscribing. 

Please, my hunger glands are still going overtime from your post in grilling, I don’t want to think about fart oder.

[otto150]

okie dokie